This is the method we use for revision in the classroom, taken from Kelly Gallagher
RADaR for Revision
R
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A
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D and
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R
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REPLACE
- words that are not specific
- words that are overused
- sentences that are unclear
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ADD
- new information
- descriptive adjectives and adverbs
- rhetorical and literary devices
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DELETE
- unrelated ideas
- sentences that sound good but do not fit
- unwanted repetition
- unnecessary details
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REORDER
- to make better sense or to flow better
- so details support main ideas
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